Solberg—a rich, individualist inventor—insists on using his time machine without having
it vetted by his staff, and he thereby falls into a trap. Perhaps I have just read too much
time travel (blasphemy!), but I feel that Carhart fell into the same trap as her protagonist:
For me, the story needed to be vetted by someone who could say how much this particular idea
needs a new twist if it’s to work.
You have a team to vet your ideas. Bring them in on this!
DEBUT
“And Yet, It Moves,” 365 Tomorrows,6 November
2012 [webzine].
VARIANTS
Debut. “And Yet, It Moves,” 365 Tomorrows,6 November 2012 [webzine].
You have a team to vet your ideas. Bring them in on this!
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